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Dear Sir/Madam,
I am very glad to hear that the library is taking measures to improve its services and facilities. Therefore, I am writing this letter to offer my proposals.
As we know, libraries are essential for students and researchers. They also play a useful social role in education and entertainment for the general reader.
In my opinion, libraries should make the best of their latest publications => chỗ này mình chưa hiểu ý bạn lắm, có phải là 'thư viện nên đảm bảo có đủ những ấn phẩm mới nhất' không á :D, as well as ensure they have a full set of classical and reference works.
What is probably important in this age is access to the Internet on computers. That way, the library can expand its services for readers on a worldwide basis.
Furthermore, computers are used in major libraries to streamline cataloguing and administrative tasks.
All reliable evidence lend support view along with social development libraries take necessary measures keep up times (chỗ này mình cũng không hiểu :D)
I would be grateful if you could take my proposals into consideration.Yours sincerely
Nhận xét chung nha: Bạn có ý nhưng mà còn thiếu logic và kết nối giữa các ý, recommend bổ sung thêm từ nối (furthermore, besides...) + mấy phần bạn sử dụng V(2,ed) mình chưa hiểu lắm là sao lại dùng ở quá khứ nhỉ. Theo mình thấy thì bạn đang offer proposals cho thư viện để nâng cấp dịch vụ và cơ sở vật chất, như vậy thì bạn có thể dùng ở thì hiện tại, hoặc thêm I think, should + V... Bạn có ý nhưng chưa triển khai ý ra. Ví dụ, ở ý này 'In my opinion, libraries should its make the best of their latest publications as well as make sure it has a full set of classical and reference works.' bạn có thể bổ sung thêm một câu về lợi ích của việc này là gì chẳng hạn.
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Cô cảm ơn em về dòng tâm tư em gửi lên olm em nhé!
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2. All flights were cancelled because of fog.
3. I was accused of straling money.
4. How is this word used?
5. All taxes are included in the price.
6. We were warned not to go out alone.
7. This office wasn't used any more.
8, Five hundred people were invited to the wedding.
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1. My father has a portable computer.
2. We are all excited about going on an excursion to Cuc Phuong forest next weekend.
3. The room will look brighter if there is a painting on the wall.
4. Some of the children mainly boys, play marbles when there is a break.
5. You shouldn’t eat unhealthy food.
6. We mustn’t be careless when we cross busy streets.
7. She often feels unhappy when she gets bad marks.
8. There are about 200 employees in this company.
9. Mai is better at math than me.
10. This lovely apartment has two bedrooms and it is furnished
1. portable
2. excited
3. painting
4. mainly
5. unhealthy
6. careless
7. unhappy
8. employees
9. better
10. furnished
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1.At this time next Saturday, I will be attend a meeting in Hue.
2.Wind energy is used as a cheap, clean and effective source of energy in the future.
3.They have lived here for ten years.
4. I hope that metros will be built in Vietnam soon.
5. Nam often plays football in the afternoon.
HT nha bạn iu❤
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